I am somewhat on the fence on whether or not this would qualify as a truly great commercial. There are elements I like. It does tell a story, like the AT&T commercial I liked. It is slightly long, for a television commercial, and it could probably be shorter. I would also love for the story to have a bit of a better ending, though this commercial is certainly a realistic scenario.
I would be interested in hearing your thoughts on the following Porsche Commercial.